Reviews
2002-09-17
"You got a good relationship going, trust in it" :
"And really, if I have to hear "The sun is shining and I'm happy!" one more time, umm, yeah. She says that a lot.":
"I like the way you write, because you express the way you feel":
"You combine a lot of lyrics within your entries. I'm not usually a girl that enjoys that kind of thing, but the mood of your entries matched the mood of the lyrics that you were writing, giving it more of a soulful look into the emotions you are feeling" :
"You are a very good writer, tell all of the readers more about yourself and your feelings-- that is what keeps a reader interested." :
"There's this insight into you in some entries that really keeps the reader reading." :
"And This sounds dorky, but you know how things feel outside after a really soft but long rain? You walk outside and the air is clean and breathing it feels good? That's what your diary reminded me of. Great read here. Very refreshing."
" "This diary I write for the people who read it." It's not a very good reason to keep a diary. You should write more for yourself."
"you are passionate about many things in life, like dancing for instance."
"It seems as though you’re comfortable with who you are and don’t mind expressing yourself accordingly. There’s a sort of bravery in that. In baring your soul to countless unknown strangers."
"The picture's pretty, but you still need to balance some stuff."
"Well, I like your writing style cause it's simple and easy to read, then there's some feelings about love and stuff, but I'd wish that you'd write more deeply about other stuff too."
"I still can't get over the constant "..." But besides that, you're entries are wonderful. I nearly cried with this one.
"I love your style of writing. It's so truthful and simplistic just as your layout is."
"Your doubts and your fears makes it easy for anyone of any age to understand them"
"Your diary is a combination of past present and future. You get nostalgic at times, and write about your memories, which I particularly enjoyed hearing about. So many people seem to contentrate on todays and tomorrows, and hearing about your yesterdays helped me get a better understanding of why you think and feel the way you do now."
"I love how you put lyrics in that relates to how you're feeling. Nice touch. Your diary is open and emotional."
"You put plenty of emotion in your writing, but a lot of it sounds the same. The inserted song lyrics made some of the entries incredibly long and a bit bothersome to skip over to read what you had to say."
"You use lyrics in your diary, which is a great way to express how you are feeling at the moment. You write really well, and some parts of your entries almost captivated me."
"Wow you are an amazing writer. Everything in your diary that I read I feel deep inside of me. You have practically perfected the art of drawing your reader in and really expressing your true self in this diary. I was captivated and read every entry."
"All in all, it’s pretty good and kept me somewhat entertained."
"Wow I loved your diary it was so cool but sad and you had lots of problems and tradiges which made me want to reaad all of your diry so 5 extra points."
"I so could relate to this: "If I could turn back time and make my ex dissappear from my life, I would.. If I could un-do everything that has happened between me and him, I would do it.." Boy, I have one just like that. If only I could turn back time as well!"
"The layout, I've seen before. I like it well enough." <-- No, you haven't seen it before.
"To make it simple, your diary was like a book I couldnt put down"
"You're just an awesome writer! I love your whole diary...awesome job!!"
"Your diary is beautiful. That is the best way to say it, I suppose. What you write, you write beautifully." & "In the words of Bjork, All is full of love here."
"Advice: I wouldn't change one thing about your diary. I think your diary is awesome and if I told you to change it, I would be doing a really terrible thing."
"Your writing is off to a good start but sometimes details make the entries."
"You pour your heart out into every entry you write. There are no boring daylogs to be found here, every entry is so beautiful, so well written, I'm in awe at how well you write given your age. Your originality and talent shine through, and I can honestly say you are one of the greatest diaries I have ever reviewed."
"I went here and I was touched because, well, it was a touching piece you wrote. It was short and (literally) sweet."
"You really know how to take everything life has to offer. It seems that you always have something important and breathtakingly beautiful to say, with a very simple pure ending. You smile so much!"
"You’re strait forward and honest about everything. And you show emotion, with very little day logging. A reviewers dream."..."In all, I like you. You’re better than the rest."
"i don't have time to read diarys, and I think you're just a little too deep for me. :)"
"You really have a great diary here. You seem smarter than the average teen."